This is a huge improvement, mate. Great work!
The top 3 things (not an exhaustive list):
- This is more polished than before, but I’m not getting a sense of your team’s credibility or what progress has actually been made. Have you manufactured working prototype parts or have any of your team developed rockets before? What makes your team the best in the world for bringing this to life?
- I still can’t see any indication that you have a business model in mind, or a deep understanding/theory about your market
- Your financial slide at the end looks entirely made up. Are you really saying you’ll have $1m+ in expenses next year (2021)? Where will you get this money?